We have finally finished our first edit. Here is the completed first cut:
Both Hayley and I think that this is quite good for a first edit. However, at 4:11, it is too short. We think that we need to put in an extra scene, but time is tight and the deadline is near. Despite this, the film has to be at least 4:30, so we have to the extra scene and we have no option but to find time to do it.
Despite our feelings about the film, it is important that we get some other opinions. After all, we did not make this film as us as the intended audience.
